Tuesday, September 1, 2009
Parker Engel's blog on the gender article had an explosive start and a strong finish, making his point without giving away any personal opinions. Parker and I shared a common thesis - that the gender article was sexist. One thing I would have changed however was the frequent use of the word "and" in the middle of the blog. This was somewhat distracting to the reader. His topic drifted a little bit but other than that it was a stellar article and I thought he did a good job.